
अगर सब कुछ एक होता तोह यह दुनिया कितनी अलग होती।
ना कोई दुख, ना कोई दर्द होता, हर तरफ़ बस खुशियां होती।
ना कोई बाड़ा होता ना कोई छोटा, सब एक होते!
में तू होता और तू में होते।
अगर सब कुछ एक होता तो यह दुनिया कितनी अलग होती!
If everything were one, the world would have been so different!
No Pain, No Sorrow, Only Happiness All Around.
Nobody would have been rich, Nobody would have been poor. Everyone would have been one!
I would have been you and you would have been me.
If everything were one, the world would would have been so different!
This is the first poem that I have written. I hope you will like it.
P.S. Getting Inspired From My Fellow Bloggers!
First poem, nice job🎉, great topic! It will bless many. Ty, 🙏🏾💡
पहली कविता, अच्छा काम, महान विषय! यह बहुतों को आशीर्वाद देगा। टाइ, 🙏🏾💡
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Thank you for appertaining it!
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Ty, 🙏🏾
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Reblogged this on Ned Hamson's Second Line View of the News and commented:
If everything was one then this world would have been so different.
There is no sorrow, no pain, there is just happiness everywhere.
There would have been no fence or no small one, all would have been one!
I was you and you were in me.
If everything was one, this world would be so different!
If everything were one, the world would have been so different!
No Pain, No Sorrow, Only Happiness All Around.
Nobody would been rich, Nobody would have been poor. Everyone would have been one!
I would have been you and you would have been me.
If everything were one, the world would would have been so different!
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That’s even better than mine!
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A nice poem with a deep message..
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I’m glad that you liked it, Thankyou for the appreciation!
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Much prayer for you and your community
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Beautiful
my Friend
Let River Soul
Continue to Flow🙏
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💕💕🙏
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☺️🙌🙏
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Beautiful 💛
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Thank you! It is my first poem!
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Good job! 💛
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Yey! ☺️
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Simply beautiful. Well done.
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Thank you for appertaining! It means a lot coming from you. 💕💕🙏
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It’s my pleasure 😊
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Good
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Thank you!
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You are welcome
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I loved the poem
…it was well written
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Thank you! I’m glad that you like it!
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You are welcome
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🤗
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So good
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Yey!
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford.
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Jonathan 💕💕🙏
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HEY MAN–GREAT STUFF!
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Thank you!
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IOWA=!
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Nice!!👏👏
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Thank you! 🙏
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Reblogged it on Aadya Pens.
I say! Simply Amazed by it😎👍✨
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Aww thank you!
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👍😎
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Very much beautiful poem about unity in deversity.yeah.my dear!! This feelings are most important for present world.
Nice and thought provoking as goodness for everybody.Weldon.🌷
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This is first poem that I’ve written. Thank you for appertaining dear.
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Wonderful.you should write many poems because now a days,India is needed for your poems and all world too.
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That’s so sweet! I will try my best.
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Good.you are most welcome,dear!!bless you.
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Same to you!
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😊
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Dear Aashwinshanker!! That poem”where my dreamings……..” is written by dear Jonathan Caswell.on his blog ,I read your poem”अगर हम एक होते” ।
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Jonathan is my friend and good writer! Thanks for appertaining us both!
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Beautiful relation.most welcome.
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बहुत सुन्दर लयिनें 👌🌷काश ऐसा होता 🌷🙏
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Hmare soch badalne se zarur ho sakta hai! Thank you!
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Nice 👌welcome 🙏
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